Thursday, June 9, 2011

Babcia's Will

For those in my workshop group yesterday, if you forget to bring my short story back to me with markups, feel free to comment on this post to tell me what you liked and what I need to work on! I feel like my story might be a little too short and end too abruptly; if you agree, please help me revise to make this better!
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6 comments:

  1. CarrieJune 9, 2011 at 6:40 PM

    Amanda, did your group not get to discuss your story? Did you run out of time?

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  2. AmandaJune 9, 2011 at 7:53 PM

    Yes, we ran out of time. I talked to William a bit after class today and he gave me my paper back with some markups. I didn't get the whole group's opinion, though.

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  3. CarrieJune 10, 2011 at 1:36 PM

    Okay, I'll make sure you get commentary. Do you want to talk to me about it after (or before) class on Monday?

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  4. AmandaJune 11, 2011 at 2:01 PM

    I could meet before class. I get out of class at 9:15 at Shelby so I could meet you shortly after.

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  5. CarrieJune 12, 2011 at 7:52 PM

    Ok, see you then . . .

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  6. AmandaJune 12, 2011 at 7:57 PM

    Sorry, this is a stupid question: we're meeting in your office, right?

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